X-Git-Url: https://codewiz.org/gitweb?a=blobdiff_plain;ds=inline;f=TwoHundredDollarLaptop;h=7b2e6e78325c959972726057b9de880727ddcc31;hb=d3bb5627ae018bb650b469c4fe1baa6694f45e96;hp=3717e1b223808a5689855a7bf9c6f95942a58ee7;hpb=d644eecdfb7ccdebc90b1b22cd1851fdfbd30854;p=wiki.git
diff --git a/TwoHundredDollarLaptop b/TwoHundredDollarLaptop
index 3717e1b..7b2e6e7 100644
--- a/TwoHundredDollarLaptop
+++ b/TwoHundredDollarLaptop
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
=== A Laptop for the Elite ===
-The $200 laptop freely aims to compete with the OLPC and CMPC by providing **better performance** and **more features**
+The $200 laptop aims to create heathy **free competition** with inferior products on the market such as the **OLPC** and the **CMPC** by providing **better performance** and **more features**
for all those who **can afford** it.
the right laptop for your spoiled brats
@@ -16,6 +16,8 @@ for all those who **can afford** it.
=== A $rich$ set of features ===
+Our first product, the **XOXO**, comes with:
+
* wide-screen 16" display, **2000 ANSI lumen** for perfect visibility while facing the sun
* dual-core SMP: **AMD Geode** + **Intel ULV** -- no need to choose!
@@ -55,16 +57,16 @@ Think about it, you **know** it's true!
=== Charity is for wimps! ===
-join the "Give 0 Get 2" program NOW!
+Join our original "GIVE 0, GET 2" program NOW!
See for yourself from this independent market analysis:
|| || competitor || **G0G2** ||
|| //You spend// || $400 || **$399.99** ||
-|| //You give// || 1 || **0** ||
-|| //You GET// || 1 || **2** ||
-|| //Pay per view// || na || **automatically charged on your card** ||
+|| //You give// || 1 XO || **0** ||
+|| //You GET// || 1 XO || **1 XOXO** ||
+|| //Pay per view// || na || **charged on your card** ||
=== What others are saying ===
@@ -83,4 +85,4 @@ See for yourself from this independent market analysis:
//"This is horseshit. Horseshit, horseshit, horseshit. And for those of you who don't know what that means, it's the shit that comes from a horse!"//
-- Greg, Columbia Internet
-Visit our [[http://www.mslinux.org/ | Sponsor]]
+Visit our [[http://www.mslinux.org/ | secret sponsor]]