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-== The $200 Laptop Is Coming! ==
+== The $200 Laptop is Coming! ==
 
 //"We are putting a deluxe laptop in the hands of every lucky child in the world!"// -- **Ebenezer Scrooge**, TLPC CEO
 
@@ -74,27 +74,24 @@ See for yourself from this independent market analysis:
 || //You GET//      ||  1 XO         || **1 XOXO**   ||
 || //Pay per view// ||  na           || **charged on your card** ||
 
-=== A glimpse of the future ===
+=== A glimpse into the future ===
 
-The Two Hundred Dollar Laptop consortium is proud to unveil its
-UpcomingProducts, with enhanced collaboration and sharing features.
+The TLPC Consortium is proud to unveil its UpcomingProducts roadmap,
+with **enhanced collaboration and document sharing features**.
 
 === What others are saying ===
 
-//"They want me to be a whore!"//
--- LinusTorvalds
-
-//"He doesn't scare me as much as he scares others."//
--- RichardStallman
+//I don't smoke nearly as much crack as I'm accused of//
+-- CosmicPenguin
 
-//"Jesus Christ, who are these people?"//
--- BillGates
+//"When are we going to stop prototyping and start writing code for real?"//
+-- DavidWoodhouse
 
-//"I don't remember agreeing to that."//
--- JanetReno
+//"The wisdom of allowing Java programs to mess with physical memory is not a topic which should need further discussion here."//
+-- JohnathanCorbet on the LWN Kernel Page
 
-//"This is horseshit. Horseshit, horseshit, horseshit. And for those of you who don't know what that means, it's the shit that comes from a horse!"//
--- Greg, ColumbiaInternet
+//"They want me to be a whore!"//
+-- LinusTorvalds
 
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