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@@ -1,4 +1,7 @@
-== The $400 Laptop Is Coming! ==
+== The $200 Laptop Is Coming! ==
+
+//"We are putting a deluxe laptop in the hands of every lucky child in the world!"// -- **Ebenezer Negroponte**, CEO
+
 
 <div>TwoHundredDollarLaptopSmall.jpg</div>
 
@@ -20,7 +23,7 @@ for those who **can afford** it.</div>
  * dual-keyboard with **independent layouts**: type both in US and JP at the same time!
  * dual-flash **RAID1 storage technology** for improved data reliability!
  * dual-boot with GRUB in the OS of your choice: preloaded with '''Ubloantu Linux''' and '''Windows EXbedded''' -- <span style="color: red">NEW!</span>
- * Patented wi-fi Fonero technology: choose to be '''both a Bill and a Linus'''!
+ * Patented WI-FI Fonero technology: choose to be '''both a Bill and a Linus'''!
  * UAC-CCS DRM and copy protection scheme for your **Genuine Advantage**!
  * Triple trackpad: simultaneously use both your hands and your nose!
  * Dual lead-acid **hot-swappable** battery packs for improved mileage!
@@ -35,8 +38,13 @@ for those who **can afford** it.</div>
 
 <div style="font-size: 14pt">
 
-This laptop has been designed from the ground up for the children of rich consumist countries:
-the computer that grows along with your kids (*).
+If you really **love** your kids, then you **must** buy them the **best** on the market!
+
+Designed from the ground up for the children of rich consumist countries:
+the laptop that grows along with your kids (*).
+
+With twice as many features, your children will learn **twice as much**!
+Think about it, you **know** it's true!
 
 </div>
 
@@ -44,7 +52,7 @@ the computer that grows along with your kids (*).
 [*] we'll make sure you will have to upgrade it every year!
 </div>
 
-Being generous is for wimps!
+=== Charity is for wimps! ===
 
 <div style="font-weight: bold; font-size: 24pt; text-align: center">
 Join the "<span style="color: red">Give 0 Get 2</span>" program!
@@ -52,26 +60,27 @@ Join the "<span style="color: red">Give 0 Get 2</span>" program!
 
 See for yourself from this independent market analysis:
 
-||               ||  Competitor   ||  **G0G2**     ||
-|| //You spend// ||  $400         ||  **$399.99**  ||
-|| //You give//  ||  1            ||  **0**        ||
-|| //You GET//   ||  1            ||  **2**        ||
+||                  ||  competitor   || **G0G2**     ||
+|| //You spend//    ||  $400         || **$399.99**  ||
+|| //You give//     ||  1            || **0**        ||
+|| //You GET//      ||  1            || **2**        ||
+|| //Pay per view// ||  na           || **automatically charged on your card** ||
 
 === What others are saying ===
 
-"They want me to be a whore!"
--- //Linus Torvalds//
+//"They want me to be a whore!"//
+-- Linus Torvalds
 
-"He doesn't scare me as much as he scares others."
--- //Richard Stallman//
+//"He doesn't scare me as much as he scares others."//
+-- Richard Stallman
 
-"Jesus Christ, who are these people?"
--- //Bill Gates//
+//"Jesus Christ, who are these people?"//
+-- Bill Gates
 
-"I don't remember agreeing to that."
--- //Janet Reno//
+//"I don't remember agreeing to that."//
+-- Janet Reno
 
-"This is horseshit. Horseshit, horseshit, horseshit. And for those of you who don't know what that means, it's the shit that comes from a horse!"
--- //Greg, Columbia Internet//
+//"This is horseshit. Horseshit, horseshit, horseshit. And for those of you who don't know what that means, it's the shit that comes from a horse!"//
+-- Greg, Columbia Internet
 
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