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 == The $200 Laptop Is Coming! ==
 
-//"We are putting a wide-screen laptop in the hands of every lucky child in the world!"// -- **Ebenezer Negroponte**, CEO
+//"We are putting a deluxe laptop in the hands of every lucky child in the world!"// -- **Ebenezer Negroponte**, CEO
 
 
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@@ -38,8 +38,13 @@ for those who **can afford** it.</div>
 
 <div style="font-size: 14pt">
 
-This laptop has been designed from the ground up for the children of rich consumist countries:
-the computer that grows along with your kids (*).
+If you really **love** your kids, then you **must** buy them the **best** on the market!
+
+Designed from the ground up for the children of rich consumist countries:
+the laptop that grows along with your kids (*).
+
+With twice as many features, your children will learn **twice as much**!
+Think about it, you **know** it's true!
 
 </div>
 
@@ -47,7 +52,7 @@ the computer that grows along with your kids (*).
 [*] we'll make sure you will have to upgrade it every year!
 </div>
 
-Charity is for wimps!
+=== Charity is for wimps! ===
 
 <div style="font-weight: bold; font-size: 24pt; text-align: center">
 Join the "<span style="color: red">Give 0 Get 2</span>" program!