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 === Career Objectives ===
 
-My primary interests are in system programming, compilers, firmware, sensors, robotics, machine learning, GPUs, education technology, distributed systems, low-latency networking, and realtime applications. \\
-Anything related to science, technology and consumer electronics is likely to attract me, //especially// if it's not already listed below.
+My primary interests are in system programming, compilers, firmware, sensors, robotics, machine learning, GPUs, education technology, distributed systems, low-latency networking, and real-time.
+Anything related to science, technology and consumer electronics is likely to attract me, //especially// if it's not already listed here.
 
 === Summary ===
 
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  * Product/Release Manager, [[http://www.paraguayeduca.org/ | Paraguay Educa]]
  * OS Developer (volunteer), [[OneLaptopPerChild | One Laptop Per Child]]
  * CTO, Co-Founder at [[https://www.develer.com/en/ | Develer]], software and embedded systems engineering firm
- * Contributor of various Free Software projects, including [[https://gcc.gnu.org/ | GCC]] and the [[https://www.kernel.org/ | Linux kernel]]
+ * Contributor of various open-source projects, including [[https://gcc.gnu.org/ | GCC]] and the [[https://www.kernel.org/ | Linux kernel]]
 
 === Skills ===
 
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  * Platform development, packaging, release engineering
 
 ==== CTO, Co-founder at Develer (Nov 2002 ~ Apr 2007) ====
- * Designer of [[http://bertos.org/|BeRTOS]], a modular, open source RTOS for 8bit and 16bit microcontrollers.
+ * Designer of [[http://bertos.org/|BeRTOS]], a modular, open-source RTOS for 8bit and 16bit microcontrollers.
  * Built team of highly skilled Linux and firmware engineers
  * Wrote firmware for embedded systems and DSPs (over a dozen different architectures)
  * Created project hosting and remote collaboration infrastructure