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  * Assist hosted free software projects such as the GNU Project, Savannah, Gnewsense, Trisquel...
 
 ==== Co-founder Sugar Labs (May 2008 to present) ===
- * Member of the Oversight Board
+ * Member of the Oversight Board (2008 to 2011)
  * Coordinator of the Infrastructure Team
  * Funding, partnerships and organization of events
 
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  * In-house maintainer of the X11 windowing system
  * i18n, input devices and keyboard layouts
  * Miscellaneous OS development, packaging, release engineering
- * Porting existing applications to the OLPC environment
- * Miscellaneous Linux kernel development
- * CTO at OLPC Europe (a sales force based in Brussels)
 
 ==== R&D Director, Co-founder, VP at Develer s.r.l. (Nov 2001 -- Apr 2007) ====
  * Design advanced firmware for embedded systems and DSPs
  * Director of the Embedded Engineering department
  * Manage sales and customer relations
- * Created corporate network and infrastructure for project management
+ * Created corporate network and project management infrastructure
 
 ==== Freelance software engineering consultant (2000 -- 2009) ====
  * Firmware development for **SEAC R&D labs**
  * Development of POS drivers and system software for **Marconi Commerce Systems**
- * Developed compiler/interpreter of a specialized OO language for **Telecom Italia Labs**
+ * Develop compiler/interpreter of a specialized OO language for **Telecom Italia Labs**
  * Air traffic control radio DSP firmware for **Selex Communications**
 
 ==== Instructor for European Fund's engineering courses (2002 -- 2004 and 2006 -- 2007) ====
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 ==== Co-founder and CTO, Sirius s.r.l. (late 2000 -- mid 2001) ====
  * Developed firmware and high-level software of cooling and telemetry system for laser surgery
- * Created and managed the network, IT and development infrastructure for the whole company
+ * Created and managed network, IT and development infrastructure for the entire company
 
 ==== Firmware engineer at SEAC R&D laboratories (June 1996 -- April 2000) ====
  * Developed firmware for several devices, including photometers and blood cell analyzers
  * Member of team developing software for large robotized clinical analyzers
- * Created and maintained the network and development infrastructure of the R&D lab.
+ * Create and maintain the network and development infrastructure of the R&D lab.
 
 === Pro-bono Activity ===
  * [[http://bertos.org/|BeRTOS]] microkernel designer (2001-2007)