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  * Design and implement new features for Google's Search Infrastructure
 
 ==== Senior Systems Administrator, Free Software Foundation (Oct 2010 -- Sep 2011) ====
- * Manage hosting infrastructure comprising approx. 100 virtual machines
+ * Grow hosting infrastructure comprising approx. 100 virtual machines
  * Maintain and develop Internet presence and collaboration services, spanning over 50 domains
- * Provide hosting services for software projects such as the GNU Project, Savannah, Gnewsense, Trisquel...
+ * Provide hosting services for global projects such as the GNU Project, Savannah, Gnewsense, Trisquel...
 
 ==== Co-founder, Sugar Labs (May 2008 to present) ===
- * Member of the Oversight Board (2008 to 2011)
  * Coordinator of the Infrastructure Team
- * Funding, partnerships and organization of events
+ * Member of the Sugar Labs Oversight Board (2008 to 2011)
+ * Fundraising, partnerships and organization of events
 
 ==== Product and Release Manager, Paraguay Educa (Jan 2010 -- Aug 2010)  ====
  * Coordinate engineering team to integrate new features in Sugar learning environment
- * Release operating system update for 4600 students of the deployment in Caacupé
- * Organize extracurricular activities on computer programming topics for local students
+ * Develop OS upgrade for 4600 students of the deployment
+ * Organize computer programming extracurricular activities for local students
 
 ==== Volunteer Developer at One Laptop Per Child (May 2007 -- Apr 2008) ====
  * In-house maintainer of the X11 windowing system
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  * Miscellaneous OS development, packaging, release engineering
 
 ==== R&D Director, Co-founder, VP at Develer s.r.l. (Nov 2001 -- Apr 2007) ====
- * Design advanced firmware for embedded systems and DSPs
+ * Designed advanced firmware for embedded systems and DSPs (over a dozen architectures)
  * Director of the Embedded Engineering department
- * Manage sales and customer relations
+ * Managed sales and customer relations
  * Created corporate network and project management infrastructure
 
 ==== Freelance software engineering consultant (2000 -- 2009) ====
  * Firmware development for **SEAC R&D labs**
- * Development of POS drivers and system software for **Marconi Commerce Systems**
- * Develop compiler/interpreter of a specialized OO language for **Telecom Italia Labs**
+ * POS drivers and system software for **Marconi Commerce Systems**
+ * Implemented compiler/interpreter of a specialized OO language for **Telecom Italia Labs**
  * Air traffic control radio DSP firmware for **Selex Communications**
 
 ==== Instructor for European Fund's engineering courses (2002 -- 2004 and 2006 -- 2007) ====