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@@ -8,12 +8,12 @@ smaller microcontrollers.
 
 One of my main customers was a subsidiary of MarconiCompany,
 later aquired by GilbarcoCompany.  I did development all over
-PumaPro, a *huge* C++ commerce system (slightly smaller
-than the Linux kernel).
+PumaPro, a *huge* C++ commerce system (about the size of
+the Linux kernel).
 
-I was also involved as a consultant and at the same time
+I was also involved as a consultant and, at the same time,
 as an investor in SiriusCompany, where I developed most of
-their firmware using Atmel's AVR MicroControllers.
+the firmware using Atmel's AVR MicroControllers.
 
 Another prominent project was a pre-compiler and interpreter
 for a complex configuration file used as input to a simulator
@@ -22,5 +22,4 @@ TelecomItaliaCompany.
 
 Initially, I did most of my work from home or directly on site.
 Later, I shared office space with two other consultants,
-one of which became my partner in DevelerCompany.
-
+one of which became my associate in DevelerCompany.