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 And I'll be moving in *today*!  But I'm writing on Thursday the 3rd, actually (aren't you thinking fourth-dimentionally yet?).
 
 The room is nice and comes with some forniture, including a desk.  It's on the second floor
-of a house where the landlord lives with her wife.  I like it that way: all the houses shared
-by several students I've seen so far tend to become unmaintained and dirty quite quickly.
+of a house where the landlord lives with her wife.  I like it that way: all those houses
+shared by students I've seen so far tend to become unmaintained and dirty quite quickly.
 
 I don't know the address yet.  I should, but I forgot the sheet on the table when I went there.  And I can't call my landlord either because I've stolen his cell phone by mistake also.  Yeah, I reckon I mustn't  a good impression, actually  :-)