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@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ for those who **can afford** it.</div>
  * dual-keyboard with **independent layouts**: type both in US and JP at the same time!
  * dual-flash **RAID1 storage technology** for improved data reliability!
  * dual-boot with GRUB in the OS of your choice: preloaded with '''Ubloantu Linux''' and '''Windows EXbedded''' -- <span style="color: red">NEW!</span>
- * Patented wi-fi Fonero technology: choose to be '''both a Bill and a Linus'''!
+ * Patented WI-FI Fonero technology: choose to be '''both a Bill and a Linus'''!
  * UAC-CCS DRM and copy protection scheme for your **Genuine Advantage**!
  * Triple trackpad: simultaneously use both your hands and your nose!
  * Dual lead-acid **hot-swappable** battery packs for improved mileage!
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ the computer that grows along with your kids (*).
 [*] we'll make sure you will have to upgrade it every year!
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-Being generous is for wimps!
+Charity is for wimps!
 
 <div style="font-weight: bold; font-size: 24pt; text-align: center">
 Join the "<span style="color: red">Give 0 Get 2</span>" program!
@@ -52,10 +52,11 @@ Join the "<span style="color: red">Give 0 Get 2</span>" program!
 
 See for yourself from this independent market analysis:
 
-||               ||  Competitor   ||  **G0G2**     ||
-|| //You spend// ||  $400         ||  **$399.99**  ||
-|| //You give//  ||  1            ||  **0**        ||
-|| //You GET//   ||  1            ||  **2**        ||
+||                  ||  competitor   || **G0G2**     ||
+|| //You spend//    ||  $400         || **$399.99**  ||
+|| //You give//     ||  1            || **0**        ||
+|| //You GET//      ||  1            || **2**        ||
+|| //Pay per view// ||  na           || **automatically charged on your card** ||
 
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