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@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ testing my build 45, revealing some bugs in networking and activities.
 
 == Mon, Mar 8 - Children want Sugar 0.84, for the wrong reasons ==
 
-|| {{ pictures/sugar/deployment/paraguay/caacupe/cats/00001.jpg | maxwidth=480 | CATS, Fernando's XO repair lab in Caacupe }}        || {{ pictures/sugar/deployment/paraguay/caacupe/cats/00029.jpg  | maxwidth=480 | Kids asking to install Sugar 0.84 in front of Cyber Nick's lab }} ||
+|| {{ pictures/sugar/deployment/paraguay/caacupe/cats/00001.jpg | maxwidth=480 | CATS, Fernando's XO repair lab in Caacupe }}        || {{ pictures/sugar/deployment/paraguay/caacupe/cats/00029.jpg  | maxwidth=480 | Kids waiting to install Sugar 0.84 in front of the CATS lab }} ||
 
 The owner of **Centro de Assistencia Tecnica y Soporte (CATS)**, the XO support center of
 [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Caacup%C3%A9 | Caacupé]], wrote:
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ I witnessed it with my own eyes: every day, children start lining up outside of
 early in the morning, and keep coming all day long, until the evening. All of them ask
 for the new version, bui in interesting ways: a little boy said:
 
- "//Quiero poner ventanas coloradas//" (I want colored windows).
+ "//Quiero poner ventanas coloradas//" (I want to install colored windows).
 
 They're obviously referring to the Gnome desktop, also known as "//salva pantallas//" (screensaver).
 Another kid admired his freshly installed Gnome desktop and proudly declared: "//Ahora tienen Windows!//"
@@ -125,8 +125,9 @@ also comes with a screensaver which makes it irresistible.
 
 So, what do we do? Quick! Let's add a cool screensaver to Sugar! :-)
 
-Of course not, but could we do anything to appeal more to kids? By now, I think I've observed
-our young users closely enough to be able to guess what they're really missing in Sugar:
+Of course not, but could we do anything to appeal to kids more than a traditional desktop?
+By now, I think I've observed our young users closely enough to be able to guess what they're
+really missing in Sugar:
 
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 more configurability.