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 Sayamindu came up with a plan for a Sunday excursion to the [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minuteman_Bikeway|Minuteman Bikeway]].
 Dogi, Marina and I did it with roller skates, with the support of Sayamindu's bike. Adam reached us a little later on a second bike.
 
-See the complete trip commentary in the [[pictures/home/boston/biskating_minuteman|Codew'z photostream]].
+Don't miss the complete trip commentary in our [[pictures/home/boston/biskating_minuteman|Codew'z photostream]].
 
-{{pictures/home/boston/biskating_minuteman/img_2486.jpg|maxwidth=800|Fresh people at the beginning of the track}}
+{{pictures/home/boston/biskating_minuteman/img_2486.jpg|maxwidth=800|Fresh, merry people at the beginning of the track}}
 {{pictures/home/boston/biskating_minuteman/img_2489.jpg|maxwidth=800|Dogi tries to load Adam's bike with his 'Gundam' gear}}
 {{pictures/home/boston/biskating_minuteman/img_2482.jpg|maxwidth=800|Marina trying to catch up with Sayamindu...}}
 {{pictures/home/boston/biskating_minuteman/img_2504.jpg|maxwidth=800|Pic-nic at the turning point}}