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@@ -71,8 +71,8 @@ cookie-cuts their photos and uses Scratch to animate them on fantasy backgrounds
 effects and text. Recently, she started creating line-art versions of the photos using eToys, so her
 new creations look more like cartoons. At this point, Benedicto mentioned the [[http://htf.atom.com/ | Happy Tree Friends]],
 an innocently named Internet series which makes even South Park seem politically correct in comparison!
-HTF is Flash-only and doesn't seem to work with Gnash -- we're above any bigot criticism for conveying
-such inapprorpiate content to young hack^Wchildren.
+HTF is Flash-only and doesn't seem to work with Gnash -- at least, we should be above any bigot criticism
+for conveying "inapprorpiate content" to young hack^Wchildren.
 
 Nadia also created a platform videogame in which a dog needs to jump around to find the way out from
 each level, while a bouncing arrow chases him. Technically simple, but shows sensitive use of
@@ -85,6 +85,7 @@ testing my build 45, revealing some bugs in networking and activities.
 
 || {{ pictures/sugar/deployment/paraguay/caacupe/scratcheros/00005-game-written-in-scratch.jpg | maxwidth=480 | Perro Bros }} || {{ pictures/sugar/deployment/paraguay/caacupe/scratcheros/00016-nadias-work-in-etoys.jpg | maxwidth=480 | Nadia's line-art image }} ||
 
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 == Mon, Mar 8 - Children like Sugar, for the wrong reasons ==
 
 || {{ pictures/sugar/deployment/paraguay/caacupe/cats/00001.jpg | maxwidth=480 | CATS, Fernando's XO repair lab in Caacupe }}        || {{ pictures/sugar/deployment/paraguay/caacupe/cats/00029.jpg  | maxwidth=480 | Kids asking to install Sugar 0.84 in front of Cyber Nick's lab }} ||