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 ==== Software Engineer, Google (Sep 2011 to present) ===
  * Design and implement new features for Google's Search Infrastructure
 
-==== Senior Systems Administrator, Free Software Foundation (Oct 2010 to Sep 2011) ====
+==== Senior Systems Administrator, Free Software Foundation (Oct 2010 -- Sep 2011) ====
  * Manage hosting infrastructure comprising approx. 100 virtual machines
  * Maintain and develop Internet presence and collaboration services, spanning over 50 domains
- * Assist hosted free software projects such as the GNU Project, Savannah, Gnewsense, Trisquel...
+ * Provide hosting services for software projects such as the GNU Project, Savannah, Gnewsense, Trisquel...
 
-==== Co-founder Sugar Labs (May 2008 to present) ===
+==== Co-founder, Sugar Labs (May 2008 to present) ===
  * Member of the Oversight Board (2008 to 2011)
  * Coordinator of the Infrastructure Team
  * Funding, partnerships and organization of events