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 === Career Objectives ===
 
 Anything related to computers and technology is likely to attract my attention,
-especially if it's not in already listed here, is related to FOSS, or involves
-traveling. I'm especially interested in consumer electronics, scientific
+especially if it's not in already listed here, is related to Free Software, or involves
+a lot of traveling. I'm particularly interested in consumer electronics, scientific
 instruments and education technology.
 
 === Summary ===