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 === Career Objectives ===
 
-Anything related to computers and technology is likely to attract my attention,
-especially if it's not in already listed here, is related to Free Software, or involves
-a lot of traveling. I'm especially interested in consumer electronics, scientific
-instruments and education technology.
+Anything related to computers and technology is likely to attract my interest,
+especially if it's not in already listed here and involves Free Software development.
+I'm especially interested in consumer electronics, education technology, clustered
+applications and scientific instruments.
 
 === Summary ===
 
- * Search Infrastructure Software Engineer, [[http://www.google.com/ | Google]]
+ * Software Engineer (Search Infrastructure), [[http://www.google.com/ | Google]]
  * Senior Systems Administrator, [[http://www.fsf.org/ | Free Software Foundation]]
  * Co-founder, Board Member, [[http://wiki.sugarlabs.org/ | Sugar Labs Foundation]]
  * Product/Release Manager, [[http://www.paraguayeduca.org/ | Paraguay Educa]]
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 === Experience ===
 
 ==== Software Engineer, Google (Sep 2011 to present) ===
- * Google Web Server, a core component of Google's Search Infrastructure
+ * Google Web Server, a core component of Google's search infrastructure
 
 ==== Senior Systems Administrator, Free Software Foundation (Oct 2010 to Sep 2011) ====
  * Manage hosting infrastructure comprising approx. 100 virtual machines
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  * Linux kernel hacker (2002 to present)
  * NetBSD developer (2000-2001)
  * Co-maintainer of [[http://bdm.sourceforge.net|Background Debug Module]] driver for Freescale Coldfire processors (2003-2005)
- * SysOp of [[SystemShockBBS]]
+ * SysOp of [[SystemShockBBS]]
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