From: Daniel Kahn Gillmor <dkg@fifthhorseman.net>
Date: Mon, 18 Jan 2010 06:46:53 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: wordsmithing debian/control
X-Git-Tag: monkeysphere_0.28~31
X-Git-Url: https://codewiz.org/gitweb?p=monkeysphere.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=3bc5bbd31901a9b93f13e75b162f6a21688f30be

wordsmithing debian/control
---

diff --git a/packaging/debian/control b/packaging/debian/control
index 213a885..354f114 100644
--- a/packaging/debian/control
+++ b/packaging/debian/control
@@ -14,13 +14,14 @@ Architecture: all
 Depends: openssh-client, gnupg, libcrypt-openssl-rsa-perl, libdigest-sha-perl, lockfile-progs | procmail, adduser, ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: netcat | socat, ssh-askpass, cron
 Enhances: openssh-client, openssh-server
-Description: leverage the OpenPGP web of trust for OpenSSH and TLS authentication
+Description: leverage the OpenPGP web of trust for SSH and TLS authentication
  SSH key-based authentication is tried-and-true, but it lacks a true
  Public Key Infrastructure for key certification, revocation and
  expiration.  Monkeysphere is a framework that uses the OpenPGP web of
  trust for these PKI functions.  It can be used in both directions:
  for users to get validated host keys, and for hosts to authenticate
- users.
+ users.  Current monkeysphere SSH tools are designed to integrate
+ with the OpenSSH implementation of the Secure Shell protocol.
  . 
- Monkeysphere can also be used by a monkeysphere validation agent to
- validate TLS connections on the web.
+ Monkeysphere can also be used by a validation agent to validate TLS
+ connections (e.g. https).