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 === Experience ===
 
 ==== Senior Systems Administrator, Free Software Foundation (Oct 2010 to present) ====
- * Manage hosting infrastructure comprising about 100 virtual machines
- * Maintain and develop Internet presence and collaboration services, spanning about 50 domains
+ * Manage hosting infrastructure comprising approx. 100 virtual machines
+ * Maintain and develop Internet presence and collaboration services, spanning over 50 domains
  * Assist hosted free software projects such as the GNU Project, Savannah, Gnewsense, Trisquel...
 
 ==== Co-founder Sugar Labs (May 2008 to present) ===
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 === Pro-bono activities ===
 
- * [[http://bertos.org/|BeRTOS]] original designer (2001-2007)
+ * [[http://bertos.org/|BeRTOS]] microkernel designer (2001-2007)
  * [[http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Bernie|Fedora OS developer]] (2007 to present)
  * [[https://launchpad.net/~codewiz/+archive/ppa?field.series_filter=|Ubuntu packager]] (2008 to present)
  * Xorg (X Wingow System) developer (2007 to present)