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 These pages provide an informal overview of my personal activities.
 
-I also provide an AbridgedResume, which is what most companies are interested with.
+I also provide an AbridgedResume in the style that companies usually look for.
 
 === Boiler Plate ===
 
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 You're hereby granted unlimited permission to keep
 my personal information on file for as long as you wish
-and for any purpose except sending me spam :-)
+and for any purpose, except sending spam :-)
 
 === Further Reading ===