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 '''Linux Developer, Firmware Engineer, Systems Administrator''' \\
 E-mail: **bernie**@**codewiz**.**org** \\
 Website: http://codewiz.org/ \\
-LinkedIn profile: http://www.linkedin.com/in/codewiz
+Linked****In profile: http://www.linkedin.com/in/codewiz
 
 === Career Objectives ===
 
 Anything related to computers and technology is likely to attract my interest,
-especially if it's not in already listed here and involves Free Software development.
-I'm especially interested in consumer electronics, education technology, clustered
+especially if it's not already listed here and involves software development.
+I'm particularly interested in consumer electronics, education technology, clustered
 applications and scientific instruments.
 
 === Summary ===
@@ -53,17 +53,17 @@ applications and scientific instruments.
 ==== Software Engineer, Google (Sep 2011 to present) ===
  * Design and implement new features for Google's Search Infrastructure
 
-==== Senior Systems Administrator, Free Software Foundation (Oct 2010 to Sep 2011) ====
+==== Senior Systems Administrator, Free Software Foundation (Oct 2010 -- Sep 2011) ====
  * Manage hosting infrastructure comprising approx. 100 virtual machines
  * Maintain and develop Internet presence and collaboration services, spanning over 50 domains
- * Assist hosted free software projects such as the GNU Project, Savannah, Gnewsense, Trisquel...
+ * Provide hosting services for software projects such as the GNU Project, Savannah, Gnewsense, Trisquel...
 
-==== Co-founder Sugar Labs (May 2008 to present) ===
+==== Co-founder, Sugar Labs (May 2008 to present) ===
  * Member of the Oversight Board (2008 to 2011)
  * Coordinator of the Infrastructure Team
  * Funding, partnerships and organization of events
 
-==== Product and Release Manager, Paraguay Educa (Jan 2009 -- present)  ====
+==== Product and Release Manager, Paraguay Educa (Jan 2010 -- Aug 2010)  ====
  * Coordinate engineering team to integrate new features in Sugar learning environment
  * Release operating system update for 4600 students of the deployment in Caacupé
  * Organize extracurricular activities on computer programming topics for local students