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@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ instruments and education technology.
  * Product/Release Manager, [[http://www.paraguayeduca.org/ | Paraguay Educa]]
  * System administrator, [[http://www.fsf.org/ | Free Software Foundation]]
  * Operating system engineer, [[OneLaptopPerChild | One Laptop Per Child]]
- * Founder, VP and director of R&D at [[DevelerCompany | Develer s.r.l.]]
+ * Founder, VP, director of R&D at [[DevelerCompany | Develer s.r.l.]]
  * Maintainer/contributor of [[OpenSource | Open Source]] projects, including GCC and Linux kernel
  * Embedded systems [[ConsultingWork | design & consulting]] for companies in greater Florence area
 
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ instruments and education technology.
 
 === Education ===
 
- * Undergraduate courses of Educational Tech. and Math, Harvard Extension School
+ * Undergraduate courses of Education Tech. and Math, Harvard Extension School
  * Undergraduate student of CS (some exams), Università degli Studi di Firenze
  * Non-formal in multiple CS subjects including compilers, algorithms, databases, OS design, networking
  * High-school Diploma in Math, Computer Science and Electrical Engineering, Firenze, Italy
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ instruments and education technology.
 ==== Product and Release Manager, Paraguay Educa (Jan 2009 -- present)  ====
  * Coordinate engineering team to integrate new features in Sugar learning environment
  * Release operating system update for 4600 students of the deployment in Caacupé
- * Organize "hackfest" events w
+ * Organize extracurricular activities on computer programming topics for local students
 
 ==== Volunteer developer for One Laptop Per Child (May 2007 -- Apr 2008) ====
 
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ instruments and education technology.
  * Miscellaneous Linux kernel development
  * CTO at OLPC Europe (a sales force based in Brussels)
 
-==== R&D director, founder and VP at Develer s.r.l. (Nov 2001 -- Apr 2007) ====
+==== R&D director, founder, VP at Develer s.r.l. (Nov 2001 -- Apr 2007) ====
  * Firmware, DSP, systems and application development
  * CTO of embedded division
  * Sales and customer relations