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 === Preface ===
 
-A Curriculum Vitæ, also known as a Résumé, is a listing of
-overstatements on someone's career.  Mostly displeasing,
-neither of its names can be typed in pure ASCII!
+These pages provide an informal overview of my personal activities.
 
-These pages provide an informal overview of my personal
-activities.  My ContactInformation is elsewhere.
-
-If you really need a formal CV of mine and you can read Italian,
-an utterly outdated one is available here: http://www.codewiz.org/resume_it.html .
+If you absolutely need a formal CV of mine and you can read Italian,
+this utterly outdated one is still available: http://www.codewiz.org/resume_it.html .
 
 === Boiler Plate ===
 
  * ContactInformation - How to reach me
- * CareerObjectives - What I want to do next
- * PersonalEducation - What I've done so far
+ * PersonalEducation - What I've learned so far
  * CurrentOccupation - What I'm doing right now
 
+ * CareerObjectives - What I want to do next
+
 === Customer relationship ===
 
-I've worked in many different fashions ranging from supervised
-to autonomous:
+I worked in several different fashions, ranging from supervised to independent:
 
  * EmployedWorker - Jobs I've done under contract
  * ConsultingWork - Projects done as a self-employed software engineer
@@ -29,7 +24,7 @@ to autonomous:
 
 === Roles covered ===
 
-I've also covered several different roles in my career:
+I also covered several different roles in my career:
 
  * SoftwareDeveloperRole - High-level software development
  * EmbeddedDeveloperRole - Firmware and low-level programming
@@ -37,20 +32,28 @@ I've also covered several different roles in my career:
  * SystemAdministratorRole - Setting up and maintaining servers and network infrastructure
  * OpenSourceDeveloperRole - Small contributions to several prominent FLOSS projects
 
- * InstructorRole - Hands-on courses for the European Fund and for company employees
- * ManagementRole - Team leadership and small enterprise management
- * ExecutiveRole - Initial investor and chief executive officer of a small startup
+ * TeacherRole - Hands-on courses for the European Fund and for company employees
+ * ManagerRole - Team leadership and small enterprise management
+ * ExecutiveRole - Initial investor and chief executive officer of small startups
  * JournalistRole - Writing articles for technical magazines
  * SysOpRole - Running a public BBS in the pre-Internet era
 
 === Legal Abracadabra ===
 
-You're hereby granted unlimited and permission to keep
+You're hereby granted unlimited permission to keep
 my personal information on file for as long as you wish
 and for any purpose except for sending spam :-)
 
-'''Note:''' These pages may be somewhat out of date and
-certainly very incomplete as of this writing.  Try googling
-around to find out more details:
+=== Further Reading ===
+
+These pages may be somewhat out of date and certainly very
+incomplete as of this writing.  Try googling around to find
+out more details:
 
  http://www.google.com/search?q=%22Bernardo+Innocenti%22
+
+---
+
+A Curriculum Vitæ, also known as a Résumé, is no more than a listing
+of overstatements on someone's career.  Mostly displeasing, neither
+its names can be typed in pure ASCII!