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 === Preface ===
 
-These pages provide an informal overview of my personal activities. I also provide a [[AbridgedResume]] in the style that companies usually prefer.
+These pages provide a detailed summary of all my past activities. I also
+have a [[AbridgedResume|canonical resume]] and a [[http://www.linkedin.com/in/codewiz|LinkedIn Profile]].
 
 === Boiler Plate ===
 
  * [[ContactInformation]] -- How to reach me
- * [[PersonalEducation]] -- What I've learned so far
- * [[CurrentOccupation]] -- What I'm doing right now
+ * [[CurrentOccupation]]  -- What I'm doing right now
+ * [[Affiliations]]       -- Who I've been working with
+ * [[PersonalEducation]]  -- What I've learned so far
 
- * [[CareerObjectives]] -- What I want to do next
+ * CareerObjectives -- What I want to do next
 
 === Customer relationship ===
 
 I worked in several different fashions, ranging from supervised to independent:
 
- * [[EmployedWorker]] -- Things I've done as a full-time employee
  * [[ConsultingWork]] -- Projects done as a self-employed software engineer
+ * [[EmployedWorker]] -- Jobs I've done as a full-time employee
  * [[InvestorWork]]   -- Funding startup companies
  * [[FreelanceWork]]  -- Independent activities and pet projects
 
-=== Roles covered ===
+=== Roles ===
 
-I also covered several different roles in my career:
+I've covered various different roles:
 
  * [[SoftwareDeveloperRole]]   -- High-level software development
  * [[EmbeddedDeveloperRole]]   -- Firmware and low-level programming
@@ -29,21 +31,20 @@ I also covered several different roles in my career:
  * [[SystemAdministratorRole]] -- Setting up and maintaining servers and network infrastructure
  * [[OpenSourceDeveloperRole]] -- Small contributions to several prominent FLOSS projects
 
- * [[TeacherRole]]    -- Hands-on courses for the European Fund and hi-tech companies
- * [[ManagerRole]]    -- Team leadership and small enterprise management
- * [[ExecutiveRole]]  -- Initial investor and chief executive officer of small startups
- * [[JournalistRole]] -- Writing articles for technical magazines
- * [[SysOpRole]]      -- Running a public BBS in the pre-Internet era
+ * [[TeacherRole]]     -- Hands-on courses for the European Fund and hi-tech companies
+ * [[ManagerRole]]     -- Team leadership and small enterprise management
+ * [[JournalistRole]]  -- Writing articles for technical magazines
+ * [[SysOpRole]]       -- Running a public BBS in the pre-Internet era
 
 === Legal ===
 
-You're hereby granted unlimited permission to keep
-my personal information on file for as long as you wish
-and for any purpose except sending me spam :-)
+You're hereby granted unlimited permission to store my personal
+information on file for as long as you wish and for any purpose,
+except for sending spam :-)
 
 === Further Reading ===
 
-These pages may be somewhat incomplete. For up-to-date news, try googling my name:
+For more up-to-date information, try searching online for my name:
 
  [[http://www.google.com/search?q=%22Bernie+Innocenti%22 | Google for "Bernie Innocenti"]] \\
- [[http://www.google.com/search?q=%22Bernardo+Innocenti%22 | Google for "Bernardo Innocenti"]]
+ [[http://www.google.com/search?q=%22Bernardo+Innocenti%22 | Google for "Bernardo Innocenti"]]
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