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-== Microsoft's dirty tactics against FreeSoftware ==
+== Microsoft's VS FreeSoftware ==
 
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 This is a collection of a variety of strategies attempted by Microsoft
-against an extremely resilient competitor that couldn't just be brought
-or driven to bankruptcy as usual.
+against an extremely resilient competitor that couldn't just be simply
+brought or driven to bankruptcy.
 
 
 === Targeting GNU/Linux ===
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ or driven to bankruptcy as usual.
 
  * Attempting to [[http://olpcnews.com/sales_talk/microsoft/how_microsoft_got_xp_on_the_xo.html | take over OLPC]] (2005)
 
- * Attempted patent deal with [[http://linux.slashdot.org/article.pl?sid=07/06/19/1720201 Red Hat and Canonical]] (2007)
+ * Attempted patent deal with [[http://linux.slashdot.org/article.pl?sid=07/06/19/1720201 | Red Hat and Canonical]] (2007)
 
 
 === Targeting hardware vendors ===