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 This manual documents version 0.1 of the Mirrorland Communal Living Facilities, Inc.<br>
 
-Hey, it's a wiki! Feel free to edit.
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 == Living Together ==
 
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 == Internet ==
 
  * There are two separate APs: one open as a courtesy to our neighbors and users of the public yard ("GHCQ Shelter 23") and
- one encrypted for residents ("NSA Surveillance Van 23"). The shared secret for the latter is passed orally.
+ one encrypted for residents ("NSA Surveillance Van 23"). The shared secret for the latter is passed orally. You can also
+ get it from the NFC tag on the wall in the atrium.
 
  * Comcast is notorious for [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Copyright_Alert_System | reporting their own users]] to copyright associations.
- You're personally responsible for what you do online.
+ You are personally responsible for what you do online.
 
 
 == Kitchen ==
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  * You MUST reserve couches and rooms in advance on the [[https://www.google.com/calendar/embed?src=d9ldj4obvhs85p23v4ds9pn66k%40group.calendar.google.com | house calendar]]. First-come, first-served.
 
- * Long-term guests (more than a few days) should contribute to the rent.
+ * Guests staying multiple days should contribute to the house rent (usually $50 per day or $200 per week).
 
- * If you give your guests a copy of the front door key, remind them to return it (we keep loosing them)
+ * If you give your guests a copy of the front door key, remind them to return it (we keep loosing them!)
 
- * This is really important: afrer your guests are gone, there must be no trace of their passage other than gifts.
+ * This is really important: after your guests are gone, **there must be no trace of their passage** (well, other than gifts, of course :-).
  Wash any sheets and towels you gave them, tidy up the room/couch they used. Seriously!
 
  * You can throw parties in the house or in the backyard! Just let the others know and make sure you
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