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 == The $200 Laptop Is Coming! ==
 
-//"We are putting a deluxe laptop in the hands of every lucky child in the world!"// -- **Ebenezer Negroponte**, CEO
+//"We are putting a deluxe laptop in the hands of every lucky child in the world!"// -- **Ebenezer Negroponte**, TLPC CEO
 
 
-<div>TwoHundredDollarLaptopSmall.jpg</div>
+TwoHundredDollarLaptopSmall.jpg
+
+<div style="font-size: small;">Picure courtesy of MassimoSantoro (sue him, sue him!)</div>
 
 === A Laptop for the Elite ===
 
@@ -34,7 +36,7 @@ Our first product, the **XOXO**, comes with:
  * Automatically **charge your credit card** on every purchase made by your child!
 </div>
 
-(Designed by the '''Department of Redundancy Departmenet''')
+(Designed by the '''Department of Redundancy Department''')
 
 === Smart Computer, Dumb Kid ===
 
@@ -43,15 +45,17 @@ Our first product, the **XOXO**, comes with:
 If you really **love** your kids, then you **must** buy them the **best** on the market!
 
 Designed from the ground up for the children of rich consumist countries:
-the laptop that grows along with your kids (*).
+the laptop that grows along with your kids*.
 
 With twice as many features, your children will learn **twice as much**!
 Think about it, you **know** it's true!
 
 </div>
 
-<div style="font-size: 8pt; color: gray">
+<div style="font-size: 6pt; color: gray">
+
 [*] we'll make sure you will have to upgrade it every year!
+
 </div>
 
 === Charity is for wimps! ===
@@ -71,18 +75,20 @@ See for yourself from this independent market analysis:
 === What others are saying ===
 
 //"They want me to be a whore!"//
--- Linus Torvalds
+-- LinusTorvalds
 
 //"He doesn't scare me as much as he scares others."//
--- Richard Stallman
+-- RichardStallman
 
 //"Jesus Christ, who are these people?"//
--- Bill Gates
+-- BillGates
 
 //"I don't remember agreeing to that."//
--- Janet Reno
+-- JanetReno
 
 //"This is horseshit. Horseshit, horseshit, horseshit. And for those of you who don't know what that means, it's the shit that comes from a horse!"//
--- Greg, Columbia Internet
+-- Greg, ColumbiaInternet
+
+---
 
-Visit our [[http://www.mslinux.org/ | secret sponsor]]
+Visit our [[http://www.mslinux.org/ | secret sponsor]]
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