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@@ -9,14 +9,15 @@ The [[http://windows7sins.org|Windows 7 Sins]] campaing mentions the
 pressure put by [[Microsoft]] on [[OLPC]] to switch to Windows as one of the
 sins.  Many of my OLPC and [[SugarLabs]] friends were offended by this association
 and pointed out a few factual mistakes.  Contrary to what [[NicholasNegroponte]]
 pressure put by [[Microsoft]] on [[OLPC]] to switch to Windows as one of the
 sins.  Many of my OLPC and [[SugarLabs]] friends were offended by this association
 and pointed out a few factual mistakes.  Contrary to what [[NicholasNegroponte]]

-had announced to the press multiple times, so far only a tiny (unspecified)
+had announced to the press in multiple occasions, so far only a tiny (unspecified)

 fraction of laptops shipped by OLPC were actually preloaded with Windows.
 According to internal OLPC sources, there are no plans for [[Windows7]].
 Moreover, the announced [[XO2]] will be ARM based, which undermines Microsoft's
 ability to run any version of Windows except for the
 fraction of laptops shipped by OLPC were actually preloaded with Windows.
 According to internal OLPC sources, there are no plans for [[Windows7]].
 Moreover, the announced [[XO2]] will be ARM based, which undermines Microsoft's
 ability to run any version of Windows except for the

-[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Windows_CE|CE family]] crapware.
+[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Windows_CE|CE family]] crapware that was rejected
+even by the mobile market.

 
 

-The FSF has now corrected the windows7sins web site, but we are left wondering
+The FSF has now corrected the campaign web site, but we are left wondering

 what's actually going on between Microsoft and OLPC; why would Negroponte tell the
 press that OLPC is shipping Windows when in fact it's not and when their roadmap
 would make that highly unlikely?
 what's actually going on between Microsoft and OLPC; why would Negroponte tell the
 press that OLPC is shipping Windows when in fact it's not and when their roadmap
 would make that highly unlikely?