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 == The $200 Laptop Is Coming! ==
 
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-<div style="font-size: small;">Picure courtesy of MassimoSantoro (sue him, sue him!)</div>
+<div style="font-size: small;">Picture courtesy of MassimoSantoro (sue him, sue him!)</div>
 
 === A Laptop for the Elite ===
 
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 Our first product, the **XOXO**, comes with:
 
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- * wide-screen 16" display, **2000 ANSI lumen** for perfect visibility while facing the sun
+ * wide-screen 16" display, **2000 ANSI lumen** for perfect visibility even in full sunlight
  * dual-core SMP: **AMD Geode** + **Intel ULV** -- no need to choose!
  * dual-channel, **Double Data Rate** Corsair PC200 memory
  * dual-keyboard with **independent layouts**: type both in US and JP at the same time!
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  * UAC-CCS DRM and copy protection scheme for your **Genuine Advantage**!
  * **Giant** triple-trackpad: simultaneously control up to 3 players in MMRPGs!
  * Dual lead-acid **hot-swappable** battery packs for improved mileage!
- * Dual **firewall-webfilter**: only access our PG-rated marketing web sites! 
+ * Dual **firewall/webfilter**: only access our PG-rated marketing web sites! 
  * Online library of downloadable politically correct, violence free, pointless **video games**!
  * Automatically **charge your credit card** on every purchase made by your child!
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 If you really **love** your kids, then you **must** buy them the **best** on the market!
 
-Designed from the ground up for the children of rich consumist countries:
+Designed from the ground up for the children of rich consumer countries:
 the laptop that grows along with your kids*.
 
 With twice as many features, your children will learn **twice as much**!
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-Visit our [[http://www.mslinux.org/ | secret sponsor]]
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