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 http://www.cpsc.gov/cpscpub/prerel/prhtml00/00030.jpg
 
 
-The bike had not been used for some time, so it had both tires flat.
-But Walter pumped them on and they seem to be holding.  The chain
-also clanks a little, but I'm sure a drop of oil will fix that too.
+The bike is identical to the picture.  It had not been used for
+some time, so it had both tires flat.  But Walter pumped them on
+and they seem to be holding.  The chain also clanks a little,
+but I'm sure a drop of oil will fix that too.
 
-Wow!  Now I can cut the time on my way to the office by getting
-directly to the JFK/U-Mass red line station on the bike!
+Wow!  I can now cut half of the time on my way to the office by
+getting directly to the JFK/U-Mass red line station on the bike!
 
 Or maybe I could even attempt going all the way to the office...
 It won't be faster, but it's good exercise and could help me loose