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@@ -25,11 +25,12 @@ discussion. At this time, I tend to boycot those online web services that make i
 intentionally hard bulk access to data created collaboratively by their users.
 Examples of such badly behaving sites are [[http://www.imdb.com | IMDB]] and
 [[http://flickr.com | Flickr]]: both have been created by us, but try downloading
 intentionally hard bulk access to data created collaboratively by their users.
 Examples of such badly behaving sites are [[http://www.imdb.com | IMDB]] and
 [[http://flickr.com | Flickr]]: both have been created by us, but try downloading

-substantial portions of their data, if you can. The [[http://wikipedia.org | Wikipedia]],
-on the other hand, provides an interface to dump the entire database, including
-the history of edits. This is what we should
+substantial portions of their data, if you can. On the other end of the spectrum,
+the [[http://wikipedia.org | Wikipedia]] provides an interface to dump the
+entire database, including the history of edits. This is what we should demand
+from any online resource built collaboratively.

 
 

-My current personal policy is to use the non-reciprocal services in read-only
+My current personal policy is to use those non-reciprocal services in read-only

 mode, avoiding to help them collect even more information from me.
 
 Call me a fundamentalist for going through these hoops, but I believe I'm
 mode, avoiding to help them collect even more information from me.
 
 Call me a fundamentalist for going through these hoops, but I believe I'm