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-I did consulting work for several customers, including
-my former employer, SeacCompany.
+I've done consulting work for several customers, including my former employer, SeacCompany.
 
-Projects varied from maintenance and enhancement of
-existing large systems to development of new applications
-from scratch.  I did mostly embedded development for
-smaller microcontrollers.
+Projects varied from maintenance and enhancement of existing large systems to development
+of entirely new applications. I've done plenty of embedded development for small microcontrollers.
 
-One of my main customers was a subsidiary of MarconiCompany,
-later aquired by GilbarcoCompany.  I did development all over
-PumaPro, a *huge* C++ commerce system (about the size of
-the Linux kernel).
+One of my main customers was a subsidiary of MarconiCompany, later aquired by GilbarcoCompany.
+I did development all over PumaPro, a //huge// C++ commerce system (the codebase was about the same
+size of the Linux kernel).
 
-I was also involved as a consultant and, at the same time,
-as an investor in SiriusCompany, where I developed most of
-the firmware using Atmel's AVR MicroControllers.
+I've been also involved as an investor as well as a consultant in SiriusCompany, where I developed
+most of the firmware using Atmel's AVR MicroControllers.
 
-Another prominent project was a pre-compiler and interpreter
-for a complex configuration file used as input to a simulator
-of the Italian GPRS cell network.  This work was done for
-TelecomItaliaCompany.
+Another prominent project was a pre-compiler and interpreter for a complex configuration file used
+as input to a simulator of the Italian GPRS cell network.  This work was done for TelecomItaliaCompany.
 
-Initially, I did most of my work from home or directly on site.
-Later, I shared office space with two other consultants,
-one of which became my business partner in DevelerCompany.
+Initially, I did most of my work from home or directly on-site. Later, I shared office space with
+two other consultants, one of which became my business partner in DevelerCompany.