-Considering this was the first experience for everyone in the team, all operations went
-remarkably smoothly. We organized an assembly line with multiple stages: box opening,
-firmware upgrades, labeling, inventorying and checkout.
+Considering that this was the first experience for everyone in the national OLPC team, today's
+operations went remarkably smoothly. We organized an assembly line with multiple stages:
+box opening, firmware upgrades, labeling, inventorying and checkout.