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@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Photos for today (will upload later -- gomen nasai):
  * Tokyo Tower ([[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tokyo_Tower|Wikipedia]])
  * Imperial Palace Gardens
 
-Seeing incredibly beautiful things at high frequency might make one's head spin.
+Seeing so many beautiful things at such a high frequency might make one's head spin.
 In fact, this evening I've been dangerously close to faint in an [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Onsen | Onsen]],
 which was really scary because I had never lost consciousness before.  I had walked all day with very little
 food and drink, which might have been part of the problem, but diving in thermal water for a long time has
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ hot water!
 
 === April 15th - Skyscrapers everywhere ===
 
-Compared to Tokyo, every other city I had visited before would seem dirty, old, boring and disorganized.
+Compared to Tokyo, every other city I had visited would seem dirty, old, boring and disorganized.
 I can't find the words to describe my amazement walking around this amazing city full of wonders.
 
 Photos for today (upload in progress, please be patient):