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@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@ Finally, the long awaited day has come.
 Our team distributed laptops to 3rd, 4th and 5th grade children of the pilot school annex to
 the [[http://www.mec.gov.mz/dep.php?p=504|Instituto de Formaçao de Professores de Matola]].
 
-Considering this was the first experience for everyone in the team, all operations went
-remarkably smoothly. We organized an assembly line with multiple stages: box opening,
-firmware upgrades, labeling, inventorying and checkout.
+Considering that this was the first experience for everyone in the national OLPC team, today's
+operations went remarkably smoothly. We organized an assembly line with multiple stages:
+box opening, firmware upgrades, labeling, inventorying and checkout.
 
 Tomorrow the school will be closed for teacher's day. On Wednesday, we'll start to see some action in the classrooms!