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 Our team distributed laptops to 3rd, 4th and 5th grade children of the pilot school annex to
 the [[http://www.mec.gov.mz/dep.php?p=504|Instituto de Formaçao de Professores de Matola]].
 
 Our team distributed laptops to 3rd, 4th and 5th grade children of the pilot school annex to
 the [[http://www.mec.gov.mz/dep.php?p=504|Instituto de Formaçao de Professores de Matola]].
 

-Considering this was the first experience for everyone in the team, all operations went
-remarkably smoothly. We organized an assembly line with multiple stages: box opening,
-firmware upgrades, labeling, inventorying and checkout.
+Considering that this was the first experience for everyone in the national OLPC team, today's
+operations went remarkably smoothly. We organized an assembly line with multiple stages:
+box opening, firmware upgrades, labeling, inventorying and checkout.

 
 Tomorrow the school will be closed for teacher's day. On Wednesday, we'll start to see some action in the classrooms!
 
 
 Tomorrow the school will be closed for teacher's day. On Wednesday, we'll start to see some action in the classrooms!