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 === Career Objectives ===
 
 Anything related to computers and technology is likely to attract my attention,
-especially if it's not in already listed here, is related to FOSS, or involves
-traveling. I'm especially interested in consumer electronics, scientific
+especially if it's not in already listed here, is related to Free Software, or involves
+a lot of traveling. I'm particularly interested in consumer electronics, scientific
 instruments and education technology.
 
 === Summary ===
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 === Education ===
 
- * Undergraduate courses of Educational Tech. and Math, Harvard Extension School
+ * Undergraduate courses of Education Tech. and Math, Harvard Extension School
  * Undergraduate student of CS (some exams), Università degli Studi di Firenze
  * Non-formal in multiple CS subjects including compilers, algorithms, databases, OS design, networking
  * High-school Diploma in Math, Computer Science and Electrical Engineering, Firenze, Italy
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 ==== Product and Release Manager, Paraguay Educa (Jan 2009 -- present)  ====
  * Coordinate engineering team to integrate new features in Sugar learning environment
  * Release operating system update for 4600 students of the deployment in Caacupé
- * Organize extracurricular activities on CS topics for local students
+ * Organize extracurricular activities on computer programming topics for local students
 
 ==== Volunteer developer for One Laptop Per Child (May 2007 -- Apr 2008) ====