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 These pages provide an informal overview of my personal activities.
 
 
 These pages provide an informal overview of my personal activities.
 

-I also provide an AbridgedResume, which is what most companies are interested with.
+I also provide an AbridgedResume in the style that companies usually look for.

 
 === Boiler Plate ===
 
 
 === Boiler Plate ===
 


@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ I also covered several different roles in my career:
 
 You're hereby granted unlimited permission to keep
 my personal information on file for as long as you wish
 
 You're hereby granted unlimited permission to keep
 my personal information on file for as long as you wish

-and for any purpose except sending me spam :-)
+and for any purpose, except sending spam :-)

 
 === Further Reading ===
 
 
 === Further Reading ===