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 === A Laptop for the Elite ===
 
-<div style="font-size: 18pt">The two hundred dollar laptop competes
-with the OLPC and the CMPC by providing **better performance** and **more features**
-for those who **can afford** it.</div>
+<div style="font-size: 18pt">
+The $200 laptop freely aims to compete with the OLPC and CMPC by providing **better performance** and **more features**
+for all those who **can afford** it.</div>
 
-<div style="font-weight: bold; font-size: 24pt; color: gren; text-align: center">The right laptop for your spoiled brats</div>
-<div style="font-weight: bold; font-size: 24pt; color: red;  text-align: center">Now for just $400!</div>
+<div style="font-weight: bold; font-size: 24pt; color: gren; text-align: center">the right laptop for your spoiled brats</div>
+<div style="font-weight: bold; font-size: 24pt; color: red;  text-align: center">now for just $400!</div>
 
 === A $rich$ set of features ===
 
@@ -52,10 +52,10 @@ Think about it, you **know** it's true!
 [*] we'll make sure you will have to upgrade it every year!
 </div>
 
-Charity is for wimps!
+=== Charity is for wimps! ===
 
 <div style="font-weight: bold; font-size: 24pt; text-align: center">
-Join the "<span style="color: red">Give 0 Get 2</span>" program!
+Join our original "<span style="color: red">GIVE 0, GET 2</span>" program NOW!
 </div>
 
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