Edit page JournalistRole

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-For several years I've been writing technical articles for several Italian
-publications:
+For several years, I wrote articles and technical papers for a
+number of Italian publications:
 
  * ByteItalia
  * LinuxAndCompany
@@ -7,4 +7,4 @@ publications:
  * EnigmaAmigaRun
  * AmigaLife
 
-A few older articles are publicly available here: http://www.codewiz.org/articles/index.html .
+Some older articles are publicly available here: http://www.codewiz.org/articles/index.html .