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 Refer to the [[http://www.fnal.gov/pub/visiting/map/site.html | Fermilab map]]
 My friend lives in a coed apartment in the Fermilab village, which is
-surrounded by buffalos and various other animals, little lakes and bike paths.
-Indeed very pretty.
+surrounded by several little lakes with gooses, buffalos and various other
+animals. Indeed a very pretty natural park.
 
 On Saturday, I took a guided site tour, starting from the museum.  They
 have lots of real-scale models of the accelerator parts and really working